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Miyabi Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Please help with grammar
Hi everybody!
Please help to correct the grammar and make it sounds natural:
Thank you very much!
“Hello, Ms Fabio. This is Andy's mommy. My husbabd and I now has determinated to put Andy from his half day classes to full day schooling as we want him can learn more at school in both discipline, social, behaviour training and academic learning. Knowning from the principal, you are Andy's new class teacher. Here, justed wanted to say Hello and at the same time I would like to ask you to give a kind attention to Andy since he is new in the class and he needs time to adapt to new schedule, teachers and classmates. I hope you could kee p close contact with me. Feel free to drop me note, whatsapp or give me a ring. Thank you.”
Please help to correct the grammar and make it sounds natural:
Thank you very much!
“Hello, Ms Fabio. This is Andy's mommy. My husbabd and I now has determinated to put Andy from his half day classes to full day schooling as we want him can learn more at school in both discipline, social, behaviour training and academic learning. Knowning from the principal, you are Andy's new class teacher. Here, justed wanted to say Hello and at the same time I would like to ask you to give a kind attention to Andy since he is new in the class and he needs time to adapt to new schedule, teachers and classmates. I hope you could kee p close contact with me. Feel free to drop me note, whatsapp or give me a ring. Thank you.”
Top answer
'Mommy' is a child's word. Hello, Ms Fabio, This is Andy's mother. My husband and I decided to take Andy from his half-day classes and put him in full-day schooling, as we want him to learn more at school in discipline, social behaviour, and academic learning.
- 'Mommy' is a child's word.
- Hello, Ms Fabio, This is Andy's mother.
- My husband and I decided to take Andy from his half-day classes and put him in full-day schooling, as we want him to learn more at school in discipline, social behaviour, and academic learning.
- The principal has told us that you are Andy's new class teacher.
- We just wanted to say 'Hello' and ask you to give kind attention to Andy, since he is new in the class and needs time to adapt to his new schedule, teachers and classmates.
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'Mommy' is a child's word.
Hello, Ms Fabio,
This is Andy's mother. My husband and I decided to take Andy from his half-day classes and put him in full-day schooling, as we want him to learn more at school in discipline, social behaviour, and academic learning.
The principal has told us that you are Andy's new class teacher. We just wanted to say 'Hello'
Hello, Ms Fabio,
This is Andy's mother. My husband and I decided to take Andy from his half-day classes and put him in full-day schooling, as we want him to learn more at school in discipline, social behaviour, and academic learning.
The principal has told us that you are Andy's new class teacher. We just wanted to say 'Hello'
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