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Mountain Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
Please help with grammar
0 Hi, I would appreciate if someone could proofread and correct to make better if it needs to be. Thanks in advance. 02 br
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00 Hello, 02 br
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00 This Saturday at 11 a.m., we everyone's help to wrap presents for the kids and other activities as well. 02 br
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00 Hello, 02 br
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00 This Saturday at 11 a.m., we everyone's help to wrap presents for the kids and other activities as well. 02 br
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0 The comma is unnecessary and I think you left out the word 01 i 00 need 02 i 00 : 01 i 00 we 01 b 00 need 02 b 00 everyone's help ... 02 i 02 br
00 To be a little more clear I would also add another 01 i 00 for 02 i 00 : 01 i 00 and 01 b 00 for 02 b 00 other activities as well 02 i 00 .
00 To be a little more clear I would also add another 01 i 00 for 02 i 00 : 01 i 00 and 01 b 00 for 02 b 00 other activities as well 02 i 00 .
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0 Ooops, you're right. I had "need" in there but I accidently deleted it. Thank you 0-
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