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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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please help with gramma. does it sound profess. for first para. of a memo?
In response to your request, this memo provides a recommendation of whether or not the city should advertise in magazines or any types of business magazines for FY2007. Advertising is essential and we should advertise to businesses so they know more about the city. We need to get our name out there.
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Hi, Here's my suggestion. In response to your request, this memo provides our recommendation as to whether the city should advertise in magazines for FY2007. It is essential that we should advertise to businesses so they know more about the city.
- Hi, Here's my suggestion.
- In response to your request, this memo provides our recommendation as to whether the city should advertise in magazines for FY2007.
- It is essential that we should advertise to businesses so they know more about the city.
- We need to get our name out there.
- Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,
Here's my suggestion.
In response to your request, this memo provides our recommendation as to whether the city should advertise in magazines for FY2007. It is essential that we should advertise to businesses so they know more about the city. We need to get our name out there.
Best wishes, Clive
Here's my suggestion.
In response to your request, this memo provides our recommendation as to whether the city should advertise in magazines for FY2007. It is essential that we should advertise to businesses so they know more about the city. We need to get our name out there.
Best wishes, Clive
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