Please help with gramma and wording of this letter !
I found your website from google. I take a look at your writting section and found that they are very heplful. Below is my formal letter to US Citizenship and Immigration Service. I need somebody helps with grammatical and wording. It quite long, please take your time. Thank you very much.
November 2004
Mr. First name Middle name Last name Interim District Dorector of Services 126 Northpoint Dr Houston, Texas 77060
Re: follow up Adjust Status
Dear Mr. Last name:
My name is Eddie Last name. I am an American citizen who married with Thai lady in August 21, 2001 (the Marriage License attached). In January 3, 2002, we filed form I-485, an application to Permanent Residence for my wife (the receipts attached). After that we have been waiting for almost 2 years and finally filed Form G-14 requesting for information on the status of my wife and you were kindly answered us (your letter attached).
A few months ago, we were informed by an American – Thai couple, who married about a year after us. His wife First name Last name, A# 1234567 already had an interviewed and also has conditional green card. We are so skeptical about what went wrong with our case and trying to do our research from the INS website. We found the latest information about Houston TX Processing dates, Posted October 14, 2004 (the paper attached). Please see the highlight for form I-485 and processing time. It will be 3 years in January 2005 that our case have been pending and we feel that we should be able to schedule an appointment for interview long time ago.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Best Regards,
Signature
My First name Last name
Encl. 1. a copy of Marriage License 2. a copy of receipts from ins for I-485 3. a copy of your letter dated Oct. 17, 2003 4. the paper shows District Office Processing Dates for Houston TX Posted October 14, 2004
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Tess, I think your letter is very good. I don't have much to add or correct. November 2004 Mr.
— MountainHiker
Tess, I think your letter is very good.
I don't have much to add or correct.
November 2004 Mr.
First name Middle name Last name Interim District D i rector of Services Note the spelling change 126 Northpoint Dr Houston, Texas 77060 Re: follow up Adjust Status Dear Mr.
Last name: My name is Eddie Last name.
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Did you ever sleep ? I posted my letter last night (my time) and went to bed. I just woke up now and found your reply. You are so great Mountainhiker ! Thank you..thank you..thank you !