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Alc24 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Please help with corrections

i need help knowing if my corrections are correct not sure if they are

  • Where do the train out of this train station go towards? OK also can say "in what direction do the trains out of the sation go

  • You're hands aren't in the right condition to... (as in they are too clammy or something) ok

  • When transfering alot of files from one hard drive to another it slows down the rate which it transfers and as the files being transferred diminish, the rate increases If you transfer a lot of files from one drive to another, it slows down the rate at which it transfersand as the files being transferred decrease, the rate increases

  • If you transfere one file at a time, its faster than if you do several at a time ok

  • Let me see which episode of the show i have/what episode of the show i have BOTH
  • The cord will rip a lot easier than in normal life since it's in the movie and the director can't afford to have his actor trying to get free of the rope for hours, instead its 2 minutes OK

  • The script of the show is so complex that the writers couldn't have written all the episodes beforehand but as they went OK
  

Top answer

Hi, Where do the train out of this train station go towards? OK also can say "in what direction do the trains out of the sation go Where do the trains from this station go? You're hands aren't in the right condition to...

— Clive

  • Hi, Where do the train out of this train station go towards?
  • OK also can say "in what direction do the trains out of the sation go Where do the trains from this station go?
  • You're hands aren't in the right condition to...
  • (as in they are too clammy or something) ok When transfering alot of files from one hard drive to another it slows down the rate which it transfers and as the files being transferred diminish, the rate increases If you transfer a lot of files from one drive to another, it slows down the rate at which it transfersand as the files being transferred decrease, the rate increases Too many 'bits' in these sentences, and I'm not sure of what exactly is meant.
  • Perhaps the following?.
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Hi,

  • Where do the train out of this train station go towards? OK also can say "in what direction do the trains out of the sation go
  • Where do the trains from this station go?

  • You're hands aren't in the right condition to... (as in they are too clammy or something) ok
  • When transfering alot of files from one hard drive to another it slows
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thank you

question for the first one TRAIN

could you not say what i've said??

and for the clammy hands one, that ones right ?

thank you very much Clive
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hi,

no capitals, no punctuation, no answerEmotion: smile

clive
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Sorry

Could you tell me if i can say what I've said?

  • Where do the train out of this train station go towards? OK also can say "in what direction do the trains out of the sation go
  • Where do the trains from this station go?


    • Thank you
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    Hi,

    Could you tell me if i can say what I've said? You need to teach your students always to capitalize the pronoun 'I'. If they don't, people will think their writing skills are poor.

  • Where do the train out of this train station go towards? OK No. Where does the train go.'Towards' is not idiomatic.

  • also can say "in what direction
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