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0Our transporter was failed to collect the container (no. MMCU2104817) this morning, and Florence from ANL was informed us this container was shipped to France? We had required you to held the container due to the goods had a problem and also paid you the storage fee of HKD7250.00 to . This is a serious problem and big mistake. Please double check and advise us the status and solution urgently. We will hold your responsibility for all the transportation charge; the ocean freight to return this container from France to HK and also any claim from our customer. 0-
  

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02br 00Our 01b 00transporter failed02b 00 to collect the container (no. MMCU2104817) this morning, and Florence from ANL 01b 00has 02b 00informed us 01b 00that02b 00 this container was shipped to 01b 00France. 02b 00 Please double check and advise us 01b 00ASAP02b 00 01b 00of 02b 00the status 01b 00of the container 02b 00and01b 00 any solution you might offer02b 00.

  • 02br 00Our 01b 00transporter failed02b 00 to collect the container (no.
  • MMCU2104817) this morning, and Florence from ANL 01b 00has 02b 00informed us 01b 00that02b 00 this container was shipped to 01b 00France.
  • 02b 00 Please double check and advise us 01b 00ASAP02b 00 01b 00of 02b 00the status 01b 00of the container 02b 00and01b 00 any solution you might offer02b 00.
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00Our 01b00transporter failed02b00 to collect the container (no. MMCU2104817) this morning, and Florence from ANL 01b00has 02b00informed us 01b00that02b00 this container was shipped to 01b00France. 02b00We had 01b00asked02b00 you to 01b00hold 02b
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0Thank you Sir, would you please review again for my revision : (text for ***)02br
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00Our transporter failed to collect the container (no. MMCU2104817) this morning, and Florence from ANL has informed us that this container was shipped to France? We had asked you to hold the container because the goods had a problem and also paid you the storage fee of HKD7250 ** for this
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0 Thank you SIr, would you please review my revision version and please me again. (text *** only)02br
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00Our transporter failed to collect the container (no. MMCU2104817) this morning, and Florence from ANL has informed us that this container was shipped to France? We had asked you to hold the container because the goods had a problem and also paid you the storage fee of
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01i01b00I have again removed your irate sentence, which does nothing except alienate the respondent. Business communications should not contain expressions of blame or frustration. Simply advise of the facts: the agreement was breached and the breacher is held responsible.02b02br
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00Our transporter failed
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0 Yes, thank you Sir. Would you please review it again, the revssion below :02br
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00This is not the first time for your company fault. The peak season will be started from now on, and how can we rely to you arrange the shipment? Please must monitor closely to ensure all the shipment is successful. Otherwise, it will fall into a big trouble to us, and also a huge claim fo
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00This is not the first time 01b00that 02b00your company 01b00has been at02b00 fault. The peak season will01b00 be starting soon02b00, and01b00 we must be able to02b00 rely 01b00on02b00 you 01b00to 02b00arrange the 01b00shipments
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0Thank you very much for your help Mr. Micawber !0-

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