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Huayi electronic Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

please help to point out the errors of this follow up email, thanks :)

Hello Steven,

Good afternoon!

This is Yummy from Huayi electronic factory. Huayi is a professional manufacturer with over 15 years experience of earphone products.
We got your name card at the H.K. exhibition in 2014. Nice to contact you again!

Is your company in demand of purchasing earphone products now?
We can supply high quality wired earphone, wired headphone and wireless bluetooth earphone for you : )

Awaiting for your reply and have a nice day!

Thanks & regards,
Yummy
  

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Hello Steven, This is Yummy from Huayi Electronics. We received your name card at the Hong Kong exhibition in 2014. Does your company need earphone products?

— Mister Micawber

  • Hello Steven, This is Yummy from Huayi Electronics.
  • We received your name card at the Hong Kong exhibition in 2014.
  • Does your company need earphone products?
  • Huayi is a professional manufacturer with over 15 years of experience.
  • We can supply high quality wired earphones, wired headphones, and wireless Bluetooth earphones.
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Hello Steven,

This is Yummy from Huayi Electronics. We received your name card at the Hong Kong exhibition in 2014.

Does your company need earphone products? Huayi is a professional manufacturer with over 15 years of experience. We can supply high quality wired earphones, wired headphones, and wireless Bluetooth earphones.

Please contact me at
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Hi Micawber,

Is "Mister + first name", and "Mr./full name"?
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Huayi electronicIs "Mister + first name", and "Mr./full name"?
The main rule is NOT to use 'Mr/Ms/Mrs' with the first name alone.

When writing or speaking to someone informally, use the first name only:

Dear Bob
"Hi, Bob!"

When writing or speaking to someone formally, use the title plus last
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