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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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The data per your request has been added in attached file in Yellow area. The figures of 2010 had been corrected and 2009's figures need to check with supplier, will keep you updated
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I would say it like this: As you requested, the data has been added to the yellow area of the attached file. The figures for 2010 have been corrected but we need to check with the supplier for the 2009 figures. I will keep you updated.
- I would say it like this: As you requested, the data has been added to the yellow area of the attached file.
- The figures for 2010 have been corrected but we need to check with the supplier for the 2009 figures.
- I will keep you updated.
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I would say it like this:
As you requested, the data has been added to the yellow area of the attached file. The figures for 2010 have been corrected but we need to check with the supplier for the 2009 figures. I will keep you updated.
As you requested, the data has been added to the yellow area of the attached file. The figures for 2010 have been corrected but we need to check with the supplier for the 2009 figures. I will keep you updated.
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