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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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i have double check the problem data highlight in yellow for the attached report, I made the correction in bold green for your re-check. Three items have been added in green.
  

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Hi, i have double check the problem data highlight in yellow for the attached report, I made the correction in bold green for your re-check. Three items have been added in green. Use shorter sentences.

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  • Hi, i have double check the problem data highlight in yellow for the attached report, I made the correction in bold green for your re-check.
  • Three items have been added in green.
  • Use shorter sentences.
  • i have double checked the problem data highlighted in yellow on the attached report.
  • I have made the corrections in bold green for you to re-check.
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Hi,

i have double check the problem data highlight in yellow for the attached report, I made the correction in bold green for your re-check. Three items have been added in green.

Use shorter sentences.

i have double checked the problem data highlighted in yellow on the attached report. I have made the corrections in bold green for you to re-check. Three items ha
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