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Please provide us the serial number of all the goods for ABC brand when you are booking the inspection, based on our customer requirement which was effected from July 2009.
  

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Hi, Please provide us the serial number of all the goods for ABC brand when you are booking the inspection, based on our customer requirement which was effected from July 2009. Please provide us with the serial numbers of all the ABC items when you are booking the inspection. This is based on our customer requirement which has been in effect since last month.

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  • Hi, Please provide us the serial number of all the goods for ABC brand when you are booking the inspection, based on our customer requirement which was effected from July 2009.
  • Please provide us with the serial numbers of all the ABC items when you are booking the inspection.
  • This is based on our customer requirement which has been in effect since last month.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Please provide us the serial number of all the goods for ABC brand when you are booking the inspection, based on our customer requirement which was effected from July 2009.

Please provide us with the serial numbers of all the ABC items when you are booking the inspection. This is based on our customer requirement which has been in effect since last month.



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