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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Please find a comparison ocean freight for FCL and LCL base on 8 pallets goods for your reference
  

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Hi, Please find a comparison ocean freight for FCL and LCL base on 8 pallets goods for your reference For your reference, please find a comparison ocean freight for FCL and LCL based on 8 pallets of goods. What is 'a comparison ocean freight'? We are asked to correct a huge number of sentences like this about shipping.

  • Hi, Please find a comparison ocean freight for FCL and LCL base on 8 pallets goods for your reference For your reference, please find a comparison ocean freight for FCL and LCL based on 8 pallets of goods.
  • What is 'a comparison ocean freight'?
  • We are asked to correct a huge number of sentences like this about shipping.
  • I could be wrong, but they all seem to be from the same office.
  • If so, has your office ever considered hiring an employee who has good English?
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Hi,

Please find a comparison ocean freight for FCL and LCL base on 8 pallets goods for your reference

For your reference, please find a comparison ocean freight for FCL and LCL based on 8 pallets of goods.




What is 'a comparison ocean freight'?




We are asked to correct a huge number of sentences like this about shipping. I co
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Several things:

1. You really should get a screen name. First, it feels wrong to answer someone Anonymous. A faceless, nameless stranger asking questions is not friendly. Also, it gets confusing. Is this the same Anonymous that we responded to earlier?

2. Your English is so confounded that it makes no sense.

3. Don't use abbreviations unless they are very common.

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