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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Please help to modify this sentence

We have informed the factory for both shipment postponement, but the latest shipment in LC is requested by end June. Do you need bring them back to June? Please confirm. We will try to request the factory meet your requirment.
  

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Hi, We have informed the factory for both shipment postponement, I don't understand this. Do you want the factory to postpone both shipments, or do you want to tell the factory that someone else has postponed the shipments? but the latest shipment Is this one of the two mentioned above, or some other shipment?

— Clive

  • Hi, We have informed the factory for both shipment postponement, I don't understand this.
  • Do you want the factory to postpone both shipments, or do you want to tell the factory that someone else has postponed the shipments?
  • but the latest shipment Is this one of the two mentioned above, or some other shipment?
  • in LC is requested by the end of June.
  • Do you need to bring them back I don't understand what this means to June?
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Hi,

We have informed the factory

for both shipment postponement, I don't understand this. Do you want the factory to postpone both shipments, or do you want to tell the factory that someone else has postponed the shipments?

but the latest shipment Is this one of the two mentioned above, or some other shipment?

in LC is requested by
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CliveI really don't understand what you have written here.

I agree with Clive. This is so far off the mark that it is impossible to understand the intent. Without knowing what the intent is, we cannot turn it into a well phrased paragraph.


Also, this is in the wrong thread. This is not an easy question.
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