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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Please help to modify this sentence

Please be informed that the inspection has been arranged as following. Please try to finish 100% goods on May 12, we are requested present the inspection report to customer before they arrive on 14 May.
  

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Stop using 'Please be informed that'-- it is a waste of the writer's and the reader's time. Please try to finish 100% of the goods by May 1 2th. We are requested to present the inspection report to the customer before they arrive on May 14th.

— Mister Micawber

  • Stop using 'Please be informed that'-- it is a waste of the writer's and the reader's time.
  • Please try to finish 100% of the goods by May 1 2th.
  • We are requested to present the inspection report to the customer before they arrive on May 14th.
  • The inspection has been arranged as follows : .
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Stop using 'Please be informed that'-- it is a waste of the writer's and the reader's time.

Please try to finish 100% of the goods by May 12th. We are requested to present the inspection report to the customer before they arrive on May 14th. The inspection has been arranged as follows:
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