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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Please help to modify this sentence
Lulu has confirmed and released the shipment for the pending point (as per attached inspection report shown 1.2) Please send us the revised report for pass result.
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"shipment for the pending point" is a slightly unusual phrase. To me, it means that the shipment relates to an issue that was previously raised but wasn't resolved at the time and is still outstanding. Is that what you want it to mean?
- "shipment for the pending point" is a slightly unusual phrase.
- To me, it means that the shipment relates to an issue that was previously raised but wasn't resolved at the time and is still outstanding.
- Is that what you want it to mean?
- 2" reads like a sort of abbreviated or shorthand English.
- 2" or similar (I assume that's the sort of thing you mean).
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"shipment for the pending point" is a slightly unusual phrase. To me, it means that the shipment relates to an issue that was previously raised but wasn't resolved at the time and is still outstanding. Is that what you want it to mean?
"shown 1.2" reads like a sort of abbreviated or shorthand English. In full you should say "shown in section 1.2" or similar (I assume that's the sort of t
"shown 1.2" reads like a sort of abbreviated or shorthand English. In full you should say "shown in section 1.2" or similar (I assume that's the sort of t
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