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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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After checking with the factory we cannot catch your schedule for the ETD November 08. The best inspection now is hold on November 08, then catch vessel ETD November 12 and expected arrive for November 28.



  

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After checking with the factory , we have decided that we cannot meet your schedule for the ETD November 8th . ) inspection now will be held on November 8th. The vessel will be loaded on the ETD November 12 and it is expected to arrive in Chicago by November 28th.

  • After checking with the factory , we have decided that we cannot meet your schedule for the ETD November 8th .
  • ) inspection now will be held on November 8th.
  • The vessel will be loaded on the ETD November 12 and it is expected to arrive in Chicago by November 28th.
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After checking with the factory, we have decided that we cannot meet your schedule for the ETD November 8th. The earliest (?) inspection now will be held on November 8th. The vessel will be loaded on the ETD November 12 and it is expected to arrive in Chicago by November 28th.
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After checking with the factory we cannot catch meet your schedule for the ETD on November 08. The best (last or final?) inspection now is hold on (is on hold until, or is delayed until, or will be held on) November 08. We can ship on a

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