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We planned both items to be shipped in one container last week. However, the inspection (result) for R56 was failed and need to rework. So that, we consolidate Y67 with two other items (in order) to avoid waste the container space as there is no other goods available for shipment.



The correct shipped quantity was 300 pcs. This is the remaining quantity from last shipment. As 1000 pcs goods cannot be shipped completely in last container and remaining 300 pcs in this shipment.
  

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We planned to ship both items in a container last week. Unfortunately the R56 inspection result indicated failure resulting in rework. Due to the failure we consolidated Y67 with the shipment to utilise the container space more efficiently.

  • We planned to ship both items in a container last week.
  • Unfortunately the R56 inspection result indicated failure resulting in rework.
  • Due to the failure we consolidated Y67 with the shipment to utilise the container space more efficiently.
  • We had no alternative goods to include with the shipment.
  • The correct shipped quantity was 300 pieces, these are the balance from the previous shipment.
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We planned to ship both items in a container last week. Unfortunately the R56 inspection result indicated failure resulting in rework. Due to the failure we consolidated Y67 with the shipment to utilise the container space more efficiently. We had no alternative goods to include with the shipment.

The correct shipped quantity was 300 pieces, these are the balance from the previous shipme

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