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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Your payment is not yet arrived as the process / transaction takes a couple days even thought your paid on 11 Oct, as explained you before. We will do your favors delivery both sea and air shipment today to avoid further delay.
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I have underlined some problem areas: Your payment is not yet arrived, as the process / transaction takes a couple days even thought your paid on 11 Oct, as explained you before. We will do your favors delivery both sea and air shipment today to avoid further delay.
- I have underlined some problem areas: Your payment is not yet arrived, as the process / transaction takes a couple days even thought your paid on 11 Oct, as explained you before.
- We will do your favors delivery both sea and air shipment today to avoid further delay.
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I have underlined some problem areas:
Your payment is not yet arrived, as the process / transaction takes a couple days even thought your paid on 11 Oct, as explained you before. We will do your favors delivery both sea and air shipment today to avoid further delay.
Your payment is not yet arrived, as the process / transaction takes a couple days even thought your paid on 11 Oct, as explained you before. We will do your favors delivery both sea and air shipment today to avoid further delay.
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Your payment is not yet arrived, as the process / transaction takes a couple-day even though you paid on 11 Oct, as explained before. We will do your favors to delivery both sea and air shipment today to avoid further delay.
Your payment is not yet arrived, as the process / transaction takes a couple-day even though you paid on 11 Oct, as explained before. We will do your favors to delivery both sea and air shipment today to avoid further delay.
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Your payment has not yet arrived, as the process / transaction takes a couple of days even though you paid on 11 Oct, as explained before. We will do you the favor of delivery by both sea and air shipment today to avoid further delay.
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