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Mitar:
Dear Smith,
Fishing Area Ocean of Pacific Ocean is 61(Northwest Pacific),67(Northeast Pacific), 71(Western Pacific). Please advise me that you indicated Western Pacifice : 61, not Northwest on fishery certificate but indicated Northwest Pacifice on Captain Certificate.
  

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Dear Smith, The f ishing a reas of the Pacific Ocean are: 61 (Northwest Pacific), 67 (Northeast Pacific), and 71 (Western Pacific). There is a discrepancy in your information. You indicated 61 (Western Pacific) on the fishery certificate but 67 ( Northwest Pacific) on the Captain 's Certificate.

  • Dear Smith, The f ishing a reas of the Pacific Ocean are: 61 (Northwest Pacific), 67 (Northeast Pacific), and 71 (Western Pacific).
  • There is a discrepancy in your information.
  • You indicated 61 (Western Pacific) on the fishery certificate but 67 ( Northwest Pacific) on the Captain 's Certificate.
  • Please clarify which fishing area is the correct one.
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Dear Smith,
The fishing areas of the Pacific Ocean are: 61 (Northwest Pacific), 67 (Northeast Pacific), and 71 (Western Pacific). There is a discrepancy in your information. You indicated 61 (Western Pacific) on the fishery certificate but 67 (Northwest Pacific) on the Captain's Certificate.
Please clarify which fishing area is

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