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Ssmm Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing
Please help to edit this statement
To deliver the concept on “How ePlatform can bridging the gap between different parties within the e-Logistic flow and Supply Chain.”
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” 'Deliver the concept' is rather jargon-y. Better to say 'Explain the concept". What you have written is a long phrase, not a sentence or a statement.
- ” 'Deliver the concept' is rather jargon-y.
- Better to say 'Explain the concept".
- What you have written is a long phrase, not a sentence or a statement.
- If it is a title, you need to capitalize all the words or none of them.
- If it just describes an objective, I wouldn't capitalize.
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Hi,
To deliver the concept on “How ePlatform can bridging the gap between different parties within the e-Logistic flow and Supply Chain.”
To deliver the concept of “How ePlatform can bridge the gap between different parties within the e-Logistic flow and supply Chain.”
'Deliver the concept' is rather jargon-y. Better to say 'Explain the
To deliver the concept on “How ePlatform can bridging the gap between different parties within the e-Logistic flow and Supply Chain.”
To deliver the concept of “How ePlatform can bridge the gap between different parties within the e-Logistic flow and supply Chain.”
'Deliver the concept' is rather jargon-y. Better to say 'Explain the
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Dear Clive,
This is the aim of the project. I agree to use To explain the concept would be more apporpriated, however, I want to made it stronger do you have any suggestion for me?
This is the aim of the project. I agree to use To explain the concept would be more apporpriated, however, I want to made it stronger do you have any suggestion for me?
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Hi again,
bridge the gap between different parties does not seem strong enough or clear enough. Can you say that another way?
Or perhaps just something like “How ePlatform can make the e-Logistic flow and supply chain stronger and more efficient”?
Is a 'flow and supply chain' different from simply a 'supply chain
bridge the gap between different parties does not seem strong enough or clear enough. Can you say that another way?
Or perhaps just something like “How ePlatform can make the e-Logistic flow and supply chain stronger and more efficient”?
Is a 'flow and supply chain' different from simply a 'supply chain
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