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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Please help to correct two sentences, thanks



What is the shipment date your expected? Please be reminded that there are 3000 pcs goods will be shipped by first of Nov.




We cannot hold the defective goods, has they have been departure yesterday. It is based on your request to separate in two lots.

  

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I have underlined some problems: What is the shipment date your expected? Please be reminded that there are 3000 pcs goods will be shipped by first of Nov . We cannot hold the defective goods, has they have been departure yesterday.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problems: What is the shipment date your expected?
  • Please be reminded that there are 3000 pcs goods will be shipped by first of Nov .
  • We cannot hold the defective goods, has they have been departure yesterday.
  • It is based on your request to separate in two lots.
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I have underlined some problems:

What is the shipment date your expected? Please be reminded that there are 3000 pcs goods will be shipped by first of Nov.



We cannot hold the defective goods, has they have been departure yesterday. It is based on your request to separate in two lots.
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Hi Teacher, please review again my correction, thanks


What is the shipment date you expected? Please be reminded that there are 3000 pcs of goods will be shipped in first of November.


We cannot hold the defective goods, as they had been departure yesterday based on your request to separate them into two lots.
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What is the shipment date you expected? Please be reminded that there are 3000 pcs of goods that will be shipped by the first of November.

We cannot hold the defective goods, as they were shipped yesterday at your request to separate them into two lots.
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