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Although more and more people read the news on internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?

Eventhough the news are more popular on social media, newspapers plays an integral part in human being. I totally disagree with this opinion.

The world is changing so fast. People want to access the news easier. Because there are more important information that has a huge impact on their work or even their life. As a result, the demand of readers are increasing to get news as soon as possible. Moreover, with the internet, viewers can see new events throughout videos rather than surfing articles. The content of videos are well-prepared and are easy to update by short clips. Therefore, with short videos, people can only view news from two to 4 minutes.

The service of newspaper is too old. Firstly, when readers choose to update the information from a newspaper that is a favorite of them, they have to register their information and pay for that newspaper monthly. If they forgot to pay for it, their service would be stopped. Secondly, everyday viewers have to wait for delivers that bring news to them. So they must spend their time and hope that delivers bring their newspaper on time. By this way, it is not a smart way to save time of readers.

All in all, by the fast development of modern life, the rate of peole using the internet to update articles is very high. Therefore, newspaper is not a first choice of readers and it can be eliminated in the future.