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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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We noted the correct quantity for ipod connector should be 1,052 pcs. 900 pcs in your stock, 152 pcs were scraped. Please compensate USDxxx for these 152 pcs to us. These connector to be used for the other ABC’s shipment and our customer will inform you the details. We shall send you the debit note today.

The correct quantity for ipod connector is / should be 1,052 pcs and stocked in ABC factory. We will credit USDxxx for the 152 pcs scraped connector.
  
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