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Ssmm Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Please help to correct the following part of my CV



Experience & Accomplishments



  • Successfully implemented on-line training enrolment system.

  • Developed high-quality self-run demonstration CD, and produced full range of on-line user’s manuals.

  • Supervised and organized product migration training for over 1,000customers

  • Successfully refined and implemented operation procedure with a variety of gov’t departments and business partners.

  • Re-designed train the trainer program, certification guidance as well as established quality assurance guidelines with educational communities.

  • Extensive experience in organizing and co-coordinating for different size of seminar, workshop and training event.
  

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These are just my suggestions: Experience & Accomplishments Implemented highly sucessful online training enrollment system Developed high-quality, automated demonstration CD; produced wide range of online user manuals Supervised and organized product migration training for over 1,000 customers Successfully refined and implemented operation procedure with a variety of governent departments and business partners - I don't know what this bullet means. Can you restate it in "normal" English and then we can figure out how to make it work in a resume?. Redesigned "train the trainer" program and certification guidance, and established quality assurance guidelines with education communities Organized seminars, workshops and training events of varying levels of size and complexity

— BarbaraPA

  • These are just my suggestions: Experience & Accomplishments Implemented highly sucessful online training enrollment system Developed high-quality, automated demonstration CD; produced wide range of online user manuals Supervised and organized product migration training for over 1,000 customers Successfully refined and implemented operation procedure with a variety of governent departments and business partners - I don't know what this bullet means.
  • Can you restate it in "normal" English and then we can figure out how to make it work in a resume?.
  • Redesigned "train the trainer" program and certification guidance, and established quality assurance guidelines with education communities Organized seminars, workshops and training events of varying levels of size and complexity
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These are just my suggestions:



Experience & Accomplishments

  • Implemented highly sucessful online training enrollment system
  • Developed high-quality, automated demonstration CD; produced wide range of online user manuals
  • Supervised and organized product m
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  • Successfully refined and implemented operation procedure with a variety of governent departments and business partners - I don't know what this bullet means. Can you restate it in "normal" English and then we can figure out how to make it work in a resume?.


    • Developed and successfully implemented operation procedure for working partners, Such as dif
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    That's better - now, what is "operation procedures" in plain English? Weren't there procedures in place to do whatever operation you do, before you came along? So, what changed?
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