Please help to correct the following email
Please help to correct the following email. Thanks.
I write to inform you that an accident took place on 17 July 2020, 2120, which see your cleaning worker named Selina break her left elbow when she conducted routine duties at our clubhouse. Our venue staff immediately called for ambulance services after recognizing the case at 2130 and an ambulance No.123 arrived at our venue after 15 minutes. Selina received initial treatment from the medical officers and was subsequently sent to ABC hospital for further checking. Up to now, she is still hospitalized there after undergoing surgery.
To our understaning about the cleaning agreement, as the accident involves your full-time staff and employees' compensation, please instantly look into the case and keep us informed of your investigation progress before 31 July 2020. Thank you.
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Please help to correct the following email. Thanks. Red = my corrections/suggestions Blue = my advice Crossing out = incorrect grammar or too wordy Dear Mr.
- Please help to correct the following email.
- Thanks.
- Red = my corrections/suggestions Blue = my advice Crossing out = incorrect grammar or too wordy Dear Mr.
- X, I write to am writing to i nform you that an accident took place on 17 th July 2020, 2120, which see your when a cleaning worker cleaner named (called) Selina break broke her left elbow when while she conducted routine duties at our clubhouse.
- 123 arrived at our venue after 15 minutes.
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Please help to correct the following email. Thanks.
Red = my corrections/suggestions
Blue= my advice
Crossing out = incorrect grammar or too wordy
Dear Mr. X,
I write to am writing to
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