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Chowbarry Posted 7 years ago
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Please help to correct the following email.

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Dear Mr Watson,

I write to report that I conducted an inspection on our canteen at 1800 on 28.06.2019 when the visitors, mainly from 4 primary schools, having there dinner there.

I spotted there were around 200 visitors having their dinner and all the students and even teachers voluntarily tidied up their own dinner table, put the food waste and rubbish at the cart provided by supplier and finally simply reset their tables before leaving the canteen.

At last, I didn't heard any grievances about the above arrangement from any parties throughout the inspection from 1800 to 1845.

  

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2019 when the visitors, mainly from 4 primary schools, were having dinner there. I noticed that there were around 200 visitors having their dinner and all the students and even the teachers voluntarily tidied up after themselves and their own dinner table , put the food waste and rubbish at the cart provided by supplier and f inally simply reset the tables before leaving the canteen. At last, I didn't heard haven't heard any complaints about the above arrangement from any parties throughout the inspection , from 18:00 to 18:45 .

  • 2019 when the visitors, mainly from 4 primary schools, were having dinner there.
  • I noticed that there were around 200 visitors having their dinner and all the students and even the teachers voluntarily tidied up after themselves and their own dinner table , put the food waste and rubbish at the cart provided by supplier and f inally simply reset the tables before leaving the canteen.
  • At last, I didn't heard haven't heard any complaints about the above arrangement from any parties throughout the inspection , from 18:00 to 18:45 .
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Dear Mr Watson,

I conducted an inspection of our canteen at 18:00 on 28.06.2019 when the visitors, mainly from 4 primary schools, were having dinner there.

I noticed that there were around 200 visitors having the

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