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It is totally unacceptable for your schedule on 25 Oct. Our customer require the goods had paid penalty to their buyer due to your delay. Please make all effort to improve your production and move up the inspection. Looking for your promptly reply.
  

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I have underlined problem areas: It is totally unacceptable for your schedule on 25 Oct. Our customer require the goods had paid penalty to their buyer due to your delay. Please make all effort to improve your production and move up the inspection.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined problem areas: It is totally unacceptable for your schedule on 25 Oct.
  • Our customer require the goods had paid penalty to their buyer due to your delay.
  • Please make all effort to improve your production and move up the inspection.
  • Looking for your promptly reply.
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I have underlined problem areas:

It is totally unacceptable for your schedule on 25 Oct. Our customer require the goods had paid penalty to their buyer due to your delay. Please make all effort to improve your production and move up the inspection. Looking for your promptly reply.
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It is totally unacceptable your schedule on 25 Oct. Our customer required the goods urgently and already paid penalty to their buyer due to your delay. Please make every effort to improve your production and move up the inspection. Looking for your prompt reply.
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Your scheduling for 25 October is totally unacceptable. Our customer requires the goods urgently and has already paid a penalty to their buyer due to your delay. Please make every effort to speed up your production and move up the inspection. Looking forward to your prompt reply.
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