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Stellayau Posted 20 years ago
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0 Inspection is pending on last Friday, your QC cannot sure whether the power cord were correct, which had approved by Kmart. Please help to release shipment. For your information, these cargoes were used 7A “Sino” power cord, and we will show on the invoice for your easy reference. 0-
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- 0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 01 font 01 i 00 Inspection is pending on last Friday, your QC cannot sure whether the power cord were correct, which had approved by Kmart.
- Please help to release shipment.
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01 font 01 i 00 Inspection is pending on last Friday, your QC cannot sure whether the power cord were correct, which had approved by Kmart. Please help to release shipment. For your information, these cargoes were used 7A “Sino” power cord, and we will show on the invoice 02 i 02 font 02 br
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0 It is not my place to rewrite the writing and will not do it, but Clive, why did you not use "a" before shipment for the word "shipment" a countable noun? And if the cord name is a proper name or a blend name with "cord" being included in its name, you would not place "a" before that? Right? 0-
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00 I didn't try to deal with those points for two reasons. First, the whole letter was written in a very terse, abbreviated, point-form style. Second, there were so many other errors of importance that I preferred to focus on those. 02 br
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00 That's why I recommended that the author correct the points I mentioned, and then repost the revised
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00 I didn't try to deal with those points for two reasons. First, the whole letter was written in a very terse, abbreviated, point-form style. Second, there were so many other errors of importance that I preferred to focus on those. 02 br
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00 That's why I recommended that the author correct the points I mentioned, and then repost the revised
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