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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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please help to correct paragraph below

We would like to thank you very much for your bonus that we have just received. That will be a dynamic to us work hard in the future and we know we have to improve knowledge to work more effective to worthy with your care and your love.

we wish you and your family always healthy, happy and lucky.
  

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We would like to thank you very much for the bonus that we have just received. That will be a n incentive for dynamic to us to work hard in the future . W e know we have to improve our knowledge to work more effective ly and to be worthy with of your care and your love.

— AlpheccaStars

  • We would like to thank you very much for the bonus that we have just received.
  • That will be a n incentive for dynamic to us to work hard in the future .
  • W e know we have to improve our knowledge to work more effective ly and to be worthy with of your care and your love.
  • W e wish that you and your family will always be healthy, happy and lucky.
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We would like to thank you very much for the bonus that we have just received. That will be an incentive for dynamic to us to work hard in the future. We know we have to improve our knowledge to work more effectively and to be worthy with of your care and your love.
We wish that you and your fam
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