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With due respect, I would like to submit the following few points for your kind consideration and necessary action
I have been appointed as a junior account in CTG department in 2000 as compassionate ground consequent on death of my father late Mr D Costa died due to heart failure on December 18, 1999.
I am the eldest daughter of my parents and there is no male member in my family. Hence I had no other alternative but to take the job to support to my family. However, the sudden death of my father was a big blow to my mother and it was affected her health weakened considerably and she is undergoing tremendous mental tensions. She is now losing her one of her eyesight
At this situation, I have no other alternative options but to approach your honour for help
In view of above mentioned facts, I would request your honour to look into this matter and kindly consider my case for transfer on compassionate grounds, so I am, therefore, requesting to be transferred to our branch in my hometown where I can work and mange look after my mother as well.
Thanking you and once again request you to kindly consider my case sympathetically.
I have been appointed as a junior account in CTG department in 2000 as compassionate ground consequent on death of my father late Mr D Costa died due to heart failure on December 18, 1999.
I am the eldest daughter of my parents and there is no male member in my family. Hence I had no other alternative but to take the job to support to my family. However, the sudden death of my father was a big blow to my mother and it was affected her health weakened considerably and she is undergoing tremendous mental tensions. She is now losing her one of her eyesight
At this situation, I have no other alternative options but to approach your honour for help
In view of above mentioned facts, I would request your honour to look into this matter and kindly consider my case for transfer on compassionate grounds, so I am, therefore, requesting to be transferred to our branch in my hometown where I can work and mange look after my mother as well.
Thanking you and once again request you to kindly consider my case sympathetically.
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With due respect, I would like to submit the following few points for your kind consideration and necessary action my request for a transfer to the XYZ branch located in ABC City. I was appointed as a junior account in the CTG department in 2000 on compassionate ground s after the consequent on death of my father , Mr . D .
- With due respect, I would like to submit the following few points for your kind consideration and necessary action my request for a transfer to the XYZ branch located in ABC City.
- I was appointed as a junior account in the CTG department in 2000 on compassionate ground s after the consequent on death of my father , Mr .
- D .
- Costa who died of heart failure on December 18, 1999.
- I am the eldest daughter of my parents and there being no male member in my family , .
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With due respect, I would like to submit the following few points for your kind consideration and necessary action
my request for a transfer to the XYZ branch located in ABC City.
I was appointed as a junior account in the CTG department in 2000 on compassionate grounds after theconsequent on death of my father,
my request for a transfer to the XYZ branch located in ABC City.
I was appointed as a junior account in the CTG department in 2000 on compassionate grounds after the
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