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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Please help to correct my message. Thanks

I am refuse a new job and write a message to the employer. Please help to correct the message to be more polite and feel comfortable.

I am apologize that i will not come to work at your company as I have another job offer. Thank you for your kindness, hope we have opportunity in the future.
  

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I apologize that I will not come to work at your company, as I have another job offer. Thank you for your kindness. I hope that we have the opportunity to work together in the future.

— Mister Micawber

  • I apologize that I will not come to work at your company, as I have another job offer.
  • Thank you for your kindness.
  • I hope that we have the opportunity to work together in the future.
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I apologize that I will not come to work at your company, as I have another job offer. Thank you for your kindness. I hope that we have the opportunity to work together in the future.
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The question has also been answered here: https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/threads/242746-Please-help-to-correct-my-message-Thanks
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fivejedjonThe question has also been answered here
But differently. So which one is the "right answer"?
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