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Ssmm Posted 19 years ago
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Please help to correct my English

0The following is apart of my essay, please help to correct it, thanks!02br
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  1. 00The whole process implementation of change was treated as a secret commercial project. 02li
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  2. 00Such as to setup a manufacturing factory in 010200 and build up a joint venture partnership relation with 010200 corporation. 02li
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  3. 00People did not know the expected outcome in regard to this change as well as what they should commit.02li
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  4. 00 00All of the above will let employees feeling of mistrust.02li
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  5. 00The operation flows between manufacturing industry and sole agent trading firm is totally different.02li
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  6. 00Employees faced many difficulties to understand the whole process for handling the document such as ordering raw materials, placing production order to factory and how to ensure the goods delivery to buyers on time and etc, all of them are the problems they concerned about. 02li
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  7. 00Since they found lots of problems but all of them seem could not be easily solved.02li
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  1. 10The whole process11font10 for the 12font10 implementation of change was treated as a secret commercial project. 12li
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0Dear Feebs11,02br
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00Thank you very much. You are right, it doesn't make sense, actually I don't understand how to explain in English.02br
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00"People did not know the expected outcome in regard to this change as well as what they should commit." 01font00Sorry, this does not make sense. My suggestion: "People did not k
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0 Having read it again more carefully, perhaps all it needed was a comma: 01font00"People did not know the expected outcome in regard to this chang01b01font00e,02font02b00 as well as what they should commit." 02br
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00For the second phrase, would it be clearer if you said "as well
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