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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
Hi, if anyone could tell me if I've got mistakes on this CV...
Thank you.
A........... P...
R.....
4........ A.....
FRANCE
33.04........
mailto:...........@cust.univ-bpclermont.fr
Personal details :
05/05/1982.
French.
Professionnal objectives :
I want to work in the field of the electronic, particularly in the
hardware/software communication.
Education :
• 2003-2005 Institute of Engineering sciences (CUST) in the department of
electrical engineering. Specialized in management.
Electronics, Automatics, Electrotechnics, Industrial Computer Science,
Command, Systems and Components Architectures, Networks.
• 2002-2003 A two-years in one university degree specialized in engineering
sciences.
• 2000-2002 A two-years technical university degree specialized in Automatics.
Programming Languages : C++, VHDL, HTML.
• 1999-2000 High School diploma in engineering sciences.
Languages : English, German.
Work experience :
• 2005 Professional project : system of active security in a car based on
a microcontroler.
• 2004-2005 Tennis teached in Boën.
• Summers 2002-2005 Postal worker in Boen.
• May, June 2002 Work placement, during 10 weeks, in the informatics service in
the city of Andrézieux-Bouthéon.
Subject : to realize a software.
• June, July, August 2001 Administrative agent in the biological laboratory of Montbrison.
• 1999-2001 Tennis teached in Arthun.
• September, October 1999 Work in the catering trade, Restaurant « Le cuvage » in Boen.
• 1998-1999 Baby-sitting.
Interests and Activities:
Tennis (club for 5 years), Ski,
To read recent books,
Theatre.
Referees :
.....
Georges CHARPENAY
Informatics engineer
Grammar
Please help to correct my CV...
Hi, if anyone could tell me if I've got mistakes on this CV...
Thank you.
A........... P...
R.....
4........ A.....
FRANCE
33.04........
mailto:...........@cust.univ-bpclermont.fr
Personal details :
05/05/1982.
French.
Professionnal objectives :
I want to work in the field of the electronic, particularly in the
hardware/software communication.
Education :
• 2003-2005 Institute of Engineering sciences (CUST) in the department of
electrical engineering. Specialized in management.
Electronics, Automatics, Electrotechnics, Industrial Computer Science,
Command, Systems and Components Architectures, Networks.
• 2002-2003 A two-years in one university degree specialized in engineering
sciences.
• 2000-2002 A two-years technical university degree specialized in Automatics.
Programming Languages : C++, VHDL, HTML.
• 1999-2000 High School diploma in engineering sciences.
Languages : English, German.
Work experience :
• 2005 Professional project : system of active security in a car based on
a microcontroler.
• 2004-2005 Tennis teached in Boën.
• Summers 2002-2005 Postal worker in Boen.
• May, June 2002 Work placement, during 10 weeks, in the informatics service in
the city of Andrézieux-Bouthéon.
Subject : to realize a software.
• June, July, August 2001 Administrative agent in the biological laboratory of Montbrison.
• 1999-2001 Tennis teached in Arthun.
• September, October 1999 Work in the catering trade, Restaurant « Le cuvage » in Boen.
• 1998-1999 Baby-sitting.
Interests and Activities:
Tennis (club for 5 years), Ski,
To read recent books,
Theatre.
Referees :
.....
Georges CHARPENAY
Informatics engineer
Top answer
Hi, I have comments more about the organization than the English. I suggest you reformat this, and post it again, and I or someone will be happy to give you more help. I hope that's OK.
- Hi, I have comments more about the organization than the English.
- I suggest you reformat this, and post it again, and I or someone will be happy to give you more help.
- I hope that's OK.
- Best wishes, Clive At the top, say 'RESUME' A...........
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Hi,
I have comments more about the organization than the English.
I suggest you reformat this, and post it again, and I or someone will be happy to give you more help. I hope that's OK.
Best wishes, Clive
I have comments more about the organization than the English.
I suggest you reformat this, and post it again, and I or someone will be happy to give you more help. I hope that's OK.
Best wishes, Clive
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Hi again,
I forgot to mention this. You might consider adding a section at the front of your resume titled 'Professional Profile'. Here, you could talk about your technical skills and your personal abilities that are related to the workplace.
Clive
I forgot to mention this. You might consider adding a section at the front of your resume titled 'Professional Profile'. Here, you could talk about your technical skills and your personal abilities that are related to the workplace.
Clive
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"I want to work in the field of the electronic" -- I belive it should be 'in the field of electronics'.
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