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These studies include Crowther’s report in which the authors pointed out that ‘a management plan would be needed in order to set in place a process for improving partnerships between the City and NGO’s with the aim of providing an effective upgrading of the Liesbeek River valley system and a base against which to assess any future development which could significantly affect the system’ (Crowther et al, 1996). In response to this, the city failed to particularly achieve the former. However, presented with the desperate call of management the City of Cape Town declared the area and its broader locale as a metropolitan park known at present as the Two Rivers Urban Park (TRUP) on 18 August 1998 and five years later subsequently produced the broader management framework.



Additionally, a case study undertaken by Luger despondently concluded that unless the scope of rehabilitation was expanded to include the floodplain and entire catchment and, real need to control the quality and quantity of storm water runoff, instead of merely focussing primarily on the River Channel and amenity, the system will continue to degrade and its full potential will not be recognised (Luger, 1996).