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Harbinger Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please help to check this paragraph
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00 I am a consultant in *** company. My specializations include managing regional medical support team, delivering and managing medical equipment and operations, mind and body consultation. 02 br
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0 Corrections: I am a consultant in *** company. My specializations include managing regional medical support teams, operating and maintaining medical equipment, and consulting patients. 02 br 02 br 00 That's my go at it.
- 0 Corrections: I am a consultant in *** company.
- My specializations include managing regional medical support teams, operating and maintaining medical equipment, and consulting patients.
- 02 br 02 br 00 That's my go at it.
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0 Corrections: I am a consultant in *** company. My specializations include managing regional medical support teams, operating and maintaining medical equipment, and consulting patients. 02 br
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Instead starting the sentece with "My specializations include ......." , I would start it-
I am specialized in ...
My area of specializations are ....
Infact "managing regional medical support team" is not a specialization. I would suggest to split the second sentence into two.
You could say, " I have an extensive experience in managaing regional medical support
I am specialized in ...
My area of specializations are ....
Infact "managing regional medical support team" is not a specialization. I would suggest to split the second sentence into two.
You could say, " I have an extensive experience in managaing regional medical support
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