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We did not receive your email on Oct 11, even check our company server and
did not found any email from you. Anyway, we suggest you put the "request
read receipt" before you sending out the shipping order to us and I will
return read message to us. It can make sure the entire message sent to my
computer was successfully.

BarbaraPA · Accepted Answer

We did not receive your e-mail on October 11, even after we checked our company server. May I suggest that you enable the "request read receipt" function on future e-mails that contain shipping orders? That will give you confirmation that we received the entire message.

Anonymous · Answer

Thanks a lot Barbara !!

Anonymous · Answer

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