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Jacklong Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please help to check my paper's abstract

the following is my paper's abstract, please help me to check if all the sentences are grammatically correct.

the failure of finding separator “STOP A” position during on-power fuelling has frequently appeared since the plant started operations, which risks the stability of the on-power fuelling. Through the study of “STOP A” position calibration method and the causes of the failure, and by using the separator position dedicated calibration tool on FMTR (fuelling machine test rig) to measure the retractor potentiometer voltage changes caused by moving the inserted feeler 2.1336mm horizontally and due to the two inserted feelers are not in a plane, the calibration method has been improved. The improved calibration method set up the “STOP A” postion and the allowed retractor potentiomter voltage change based on the measurements on FMTR, which solve the problem of “STOP A” set light light up prematurely. The new method has been proved effective to lower the frequency of finding “STOP A” position failure.

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Failure to find the separator “STOP A” position during on-power fuelling has frequently occurred since the plant started operations, risking the stability of on-power fuelling. 1336 mm horizontally, and because the two inserted feelers are not in a plane, the calibration method has been improved. The improved calibration method established the new “STOP A” position and the allowed retractor potentiomter voltage change based on the measurements on the FMTR, which solve the problem of “STOP A” set light illuminating prematurely.

— Mister Micawber

  • Failure to find the separator “STOP A” position during on-power fuelling has frequently occurred since the plant started operations, risking the stability of on-power fuelling.
  • 1336 mm horizontally, and because the two inserted feelers are not in a plane, the calibration method has been improved.
  • The improved calibration method established the new “STOP A” position and the allowed retractor potentiomter voltage change based on the measurements on the FMTR, which solve the problem of “STOP A” set light illuminating prematurely.
  • The new method has been proved effective in lowering the frequency of “STOP A” position failures.
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Failure to find the separator “STOP A” position during on-power fuelling has frequently occurred since the plant started operations, risking the stability of on-power fuelling. By studying the “STOP A” position calibration method and the causes of the failure, and by using the separator position dedicated calibration tool on the FMTR (fuelling machine test rig) to measure the retractor potentio
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"Failure to find......" sounds strange to me.
"Fail to find....." or " Failure in finding......" is better for me.
Thank you and wish your further comments.
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jacklong"Failure to find......" sounds strange to me."Fail to find....." or " Failure in finding......" is better for me.
Thank you and wish your further comments.
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Mister Micawberjacklong"Failure to find......" sounds strange to me."Fail to find....." or " Failure in finding......" is better for me.Thank you and wish your further comments.If you don't trust me, don't use me. This service is free.
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