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Gary lee Posted 21 years ago
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please help to check if there is any grammar error
Hi tutor, I'm sending out an email to all my companys' friends, could someone please help to check if there's any grammar error. thanks.
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Hi Friends,
Some of my Intel mates are scratching their heads where has Gary gone. Why his cubicle is empty? I’m not a person who leaves without say adios. For your information I’ve being shifted from my cubicle to cr2002 room. The room is along the aisle to the pantry.
Therefore to all my Intel Charity friends, ToastMaster friends, lunch friends, sports friends, video games friends (Kanasan) and the one who is taking advantage to tumpang my car (Chun Wai) …kidding J can approach me not to my preceding cube however I’ve been placed to cr2002 and you can find me there and remember don’t leave me out of your activities.
Tiny reminder:
I’ve lost my expensive feeding bottle!!! (my precious favorite orange yellow water tumbler) and a jacket when I was at my previous tiny square box called cube. That’s where we’re prison in J. Wonder who the internal culprit was. It was a “now you see; now you don’t” event. Thus, remember no to leave your little tiny precious gadgets expose that would tempt the person and hope no others would lined up in the same scenario as mine. Nobody would take any responsibility of your lost and no others would hold responsibility over your belongings except you.
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Thanks!!,
Gary
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Hi Friends,
Some of my Intel mates are scratching their heads where has Gary gone. Why his cubicle is empty? I’m not a person who leaves without say adios. For your information I’ve being shifted from my cubicle to cr2002 room. The room is along the aisle to the pantry.
Therefore to all my Intel Charity friends, ToastMaster friends, lunch friends, sports friends, video games friends (Kanasan) and the one who is taking advantage to tumpang my car (Chun Wai) …kidding J can approach me not to my preceding cube however I’ve been placed to cr2002 and you can find me there and remember don’t leave me out of your activities.
Tiny reminder:
I’ve lost my expensive feeding bottle!!! (my precious favorite orange yellow water tumbler) and a jacket when I was at my previous tiny square box called cube. That’s where we’re prison in J. Wonder who the internal culprit was. It was a “now you see; now you don’t” event. Thus, remember no to leave your little tiny precious gadgets expose that would tempt the person and hope no others would lined up in the same scenario as mine. Nobody would take any responsibility of your lost and no others would hold responsibility over your belongings except you.
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Thanks!!,
Gary
Top answer
Hi Friends, Some of my Intgel mates are scratching their heads and wondering where has Gary gone? Why is his cubicle empty? I' not a person who leaves withour saying adios.
- Hi Friends, Some of my Intgel mates are scratching their heads and wondering where has Gary gone?
- Why is his cubicle empty?
- I' not a person who leaves withour saying adios.
- For your information I have been shifted from my cubicle to cr2002 room.
- T he room is along the aisle to the pantry .
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Hi Friends,
Some of my Intgel mates are scratching their heads and wondering where has Gary gone? Why is his cubicle empty? I' not a person who leaves withour saying adios. For your information I have been shifted from my cubicle to cr2002 room. The room is along the aisle to the pantry. (not sure what you mean here, perhaps accross the isle).
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Some of my Intgel mates are scratching their heads and wondering where has Gary gone? Why is his cubicle empty? I' not a person who leaves withour saying adios. For your information I have been shifted from my cubicle to cr2002 room. The room is along the aisle to the pantry. (not sure what you mean here, perhaps accross the isle).
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