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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Please help, thx
can anyone tell what is wrong with the following sentence:
One of the many problems that I am dealing with and confused about is the fact that even though, it is obviously possible to establish a more fun enviornment for the kids. But the majority of the teachers decide not to.
i am having trouble with even..though ..but part...can someone point it out and help me correct it please...thank you very much
One of the many problems that I am dealing with and confused about is the fact that even though, it is obviously possible to establish a more fun enviornment for the kids. But the majority of the teachers decide not to.
i am having trouble with even..though ..but part...can someone point it out and help me correct it please...thank you very much
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Here is a first improvement: One of the many problems that I am dealing with and confused about is the fact that , even though it is obviously possible to establish a more fun environment for the kids , the majority (most) of the teachers decide not to.
- Here is a first improvement: One of the many problems that I am dealing with and confused about is the fact that , even though it is obviously possible to establish a more fun environment for the kids , the majority (most) of the teachers decide not to.
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Here is a first improvement:
One of the many problems that I am dealing with and confused about is the fact that , even though it is obviously possible to establish a more fun environment for the kids , the majority (most) of the teachers decide not to.
One of the many problems that I am dealing with and confused about is the fact that , even though it is obviously possible to establish a more fun environment for the kids , the majority (most) of the teachers decide not to.
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My try is like
One of the many problems that I am dealing with and confused about is that the majority of the teachers have not agreed to provide a more fun environment to the kids even though it is obviously possible.
paco
One of the many problems that I am dealing with and confused about is that the majority of the teachers have not agreed to provide a more fun environment to the kids even though it is obviously possible.
paco
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A compressed version:
The failure of most teachers to establish a fun learning environment is a problem that both interests and confuses me.
More compressed:
Curious-
Teachers don't make
Learning
The failure of most teachers to establish a fun learning environment is a problem that both interests and confuses me.
More compressed:
Curious-
Teachers don't make
Learning
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DavkettCurious-Except in the English Forums!!! [<:o)]
Teachers don't make
Learning fun.
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PieanneAnd your particular technique...DavkettExcept in the English Forums!!! [<:o)]
Curious-
Teachers don't make
Learning fun.
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PieanneAre you familiar with this? http://www.frites.be/article.cfm?ContentID=1255If it weren't for our context here...and not being able to read French, I might think tha
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Well, Noël Godin is famous for throwing pies at the head of well-known persons - he's called "l'entarteur" (the pie-thrower?), but they say he's not "tarte", which is slang for "dumb", "uninteresting", "geek", etc... He's Belgian, of course
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