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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Please help the sentence to be more nature

Please also keep us posted on the CNY schedule for your China factory. Thanks
  

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I think you mean natural. Your sentence is a little difficult to understand what you are trying to convey. Keep us posted.

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  • I think you mean natural.
  • Your sentence is a little difficult to understand what you are trying to convey.
  • Keep us posted.
  • What do you want posted?
  • Who is us?
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I think you mean natural.

Your sentence is a little difficult to understand what you are trying to convey.

Keep us posted.

What do you want posted? Who is us?

China factory.

Is the factory located in China, or does it make china?

If helps us if you can be a little more clear, please.

K.

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Hi K,

How about threvision? Thanks to review again

We note that you did not fix out the CNY holidays schedule for your China office, please keep us posted on the status.

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Try:
We noticed that you have not scheduled the CNY holiday for your office in China. Please give use the schedule.
or perhaps you meant
We noticed that you have not scheduled any work during the CNY holiday for your office in China. Please give use the schedule.
Chris
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cbstehTry:
We noticed that you have not scheduled the CNY holiday for your office in China. Please give use the schedule.
or perhaps you meant
We noticed that you have not scheduled any work during the CNY holiday for your office in China. Please give use the schedule.
Chris
Typos:
"holiday" to "holidays"
"use" to "us"
Chris
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