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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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As per L/C term, we should received all signed PO, shipment samples within 10 working days after shipment. However, we still not yet received 1 remaining shipment sample until today. Please immediate send it to our office. We will not do your favors to release inspection certificate for you in further if the sample is so hard to receive.
  

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Hi, I've marked in bold some parts that you need to revise. As per L/C term , we should received all signed PO, shipment samples within 10 working days after shipment. However, we still not yet received 1 remaining shipment sample until today .

  • Hi, I've marked in bold some parts that you need to revise.
  • As per L/C term , we should received all signed PO, shipment samples within 10 working days after shipment.
  • However, we still not yet received 1 remaining shipment sample until today .
  • Please immediate send it to our office.
  • We will not do your favors to release inspection certificate for you in further if the sample is so hard to receive .
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Hi,

I've marked in bold some parts that you need to revise.

As per L/C term, we should received all signed PO, shipment samples within 10 working days after shipment. However, we still not yet received 1 remaining shipment sample until today. Please immediate send it
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Hi Clive, please revirew the revision and help to correct, thanks

Based on L/C, you should provide all signed purchase order and shipment samples within 10 working days after shipment. However, we have still not yet received 1 remaining shipment sample till today. Please immediately send it to our office. We will not do you favors released inspection certificate for you in future if the s
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HI again,

Better. Try again?

Based on L/C, you should provide all signed purchase order and shipment samples within 10 working days after shipment. However, we have still not yet received 1 remaining shipment sample till today. Please immediately send it to our office. We will not do you favors released inspection certificate for you in future i
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Hi Clive, yes, I would like to make the correction again. Kindly see and revise. Thank you so much

Based on L/C, you should provide all signed purchase order and shipment samples within 10 working days after shipment. However, we have still not receive 1 remaining shipment sample till today. Please immediately send it to our office. We will not do you favors releasing the inspec
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Hi,

Based on L/C, you should provide all signed purchase order and shipment samples within 10 working days after shipment. However, we have still not receive 1 remaining shipment sample till today. Please immediately send it to our office. We will not do you favors releasing the inspection certificate to you in future if the such case h

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