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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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We repeatedly advise that the goods were catch with same boat ETD 21 Jul without delay. 10% deducted from our payment is not reasonable. We require your help to resolve the problem ASAP as it had been overdue half a year. Kindly keep us posted on the status of the situation.
  

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Hi, We repeatedly advise that the goods we re catch with same boat ETD 21 Jul without delay. 10% deducted from our payment is not reasonable. We require your help to resolve the problem ASAP a s it had been overdue half a year.

— Clive

  • Hi, We repeatedly advise that the goods we re catch with same boat ETD 21 Jul without delay.
  • 10% deducted from our payment is not reasonable.
  • We require your help to resolve the problem ASAP a s it had been overdue half a year.
  • Kindly keep us posted on the status of the situation.
  • You need to reword the parts in pink.
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Hi,
We repeatedly advise that the goods were catch with same boat ETD 21 Jul without delay. 10% deducted from our payment is not reasonable. We require your help to resolve the problem ASAP
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Thank you teacher. Kindly review and correct me again, thanks

We repeatedly advise that the goods were caught with same boat ETD 21 Jul without delay. 10% deducted from our payment is not reasonable. We require your help to resolve the problem ASAP as it has been overdue half a year. Kindly keep us posted on the status of the situ
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Hi,
Kindly review and correct me again, thanks

We repeatedly advise that the goods were caught with same boat ETD 21 Jul without delay. 10% deducted from our payment is not reasonable. We require your help to resolve the problem ASAP
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