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Please help confirm the shipping details for us to the factory. The cargo will start the production on Dec 01 and finished on Dec 14.
  

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Hi, Please help confirm the shipping details for us to the factory. The cargo will start the production on Dec 01 and finished on Dec 14. Please help us by informing the factory of the shipping details.

  • Hi, Please help confirm the shipping details for us to the factory.
  • The cargo will start the production on Dec 01 and finished on Dec 14.
  • Please help us by informing the factory of the shipping details.
  • Cargo production will start on Dec 01 and finish on Dec 14.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

Please help confirm the shipping details for us to the factory. The cargo will start the production on Dec 01 and finished on Dec 14.

Please help us by informing the factory of the shipping details. Cargo production will start on Dec 01 and finish on Dec 14.

Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

Thank you.

In your second sentence, "Cargo production will start on Dec 01 and finish on Dec 14," shouldn't it be more clear if we make the underlined part "The cargo production"?

The cargo production will start on Dec 01 and finish on Dec 14.

I am asking because I see some writings where they are describing something in particular and then u
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Hi,

Please help us by informing the factory of the shipping details. Cargo production will start on Dec 01 and finish on Dec 14.

In your second sentence, "Cargo production will start on Dec 01 and finish on Dec 14," shouldn't it be more clear if we make the underlined part "The cargo production"? If

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