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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Please help straighten out paragraph

This is for a viedo game site:
Is anyone able to help make it better?

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In some video games some events are scripted. Some events happen at a predetermined time. If you are supposed to save the princess for example, no matter how fast you kill the bad guys you won't be able to save her before a predetermined moment. In other games, the sequence of events happen depending on what you do in the game. You could choose to save the princess first and do other things later. I prefer the latter when the events in a game aren't scripted, where you do as you please, when you please.

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This is one of few flashbacks to New Jersey within Max Payne 3

In the video game, you play as a the character Max Payne who works private security, some levels are in the present tense and other levels are in the past to help you understand where it all started for Max.You play as him in a flashback sequence.{in his flashbacks.}

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