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Despite explicitly mentioning to you in advance, to hold the package for me, it was returned to the sender. Is it right?


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What you have written seems clear enough, though changing your first verb would add a bit of emphasis Despite explicitly TELLING you in advance, to hold the package for me, it was returned to the sender.

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  • What you have written seems clear enough, though changing your first verb would add a bit of emphasis Despite explicitly TELLING you in advance, to hold the package for me, it was returned to the sender.
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What you have written seems clear enough, though changing your first verb would add a bit of emphasis

Despite explicitly TELLING you in advance, to hold the package for me, it was returned to the sender.
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Put a "my" in front of "explicitly", and ditch the first comma.
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