0
Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
Please help reword
How would you reword this please?
You can pick up the concert tickets starting one day before the concert up to 5 hours before the concert the of the concert.
Thank you
You can pick up the concert tickets starting one day before the concert up to 5 hours before the concert the of the concert.
Thank you
Top answer
Is this what you mean? eg The concert starts at 9pm on Wednesday. You can pick up tickets on Tuesday, or on Wednesday up to 4pm.
- Is this what you mean?
- eg The concert starts at 9pm on Wednesday.
- You can pick up tickets on Tuesday, or on Wednesday up to 4pm.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
5 Answers
0
Is this what you mean?
eg The concert starts at 9pm on Wednesday. You can pick up tickets on Tuesday, or on Wednesday up to 4pm.
eg The concert starts at 9pm on Wednesday. You can pick up tickets on Tuesday, or on Wednesday up to 4pm.
00
Try:
Tickets go on sale one day before the concert, and subject to availability, remain on sale up to five hours before the start of the concert.
Tickets go on sale one day before the concert, and subject to availability, remain on sale up to five hours before the start of the concert.
00
'Pick up' in this context suggests 'collect tickets that you previously reserved, eg by phone'.
00
Can you say 'starting the day before or up to 5 hours prior to the start'?
Thank you and happy holidays
Thank you and happy holidays
00
AnonymousCan you say 'starting the day before or up to 5 hours prior to the start'?Not in the original sentence. That would be confusing.
0
Related Questions