Please help revise my resume

Dear All,

Please help revise my resume for my job application

Address: 88/5 Lasdee Road, BKK 11990
Education
M.Econ (Banking and finance) Bee Dee University 2012 - 2013
BSc. (Marketing) Bee Dee University 2002 - 2006

Job Experiences
Credit Officer Thai Bank 2011 - 20012
Analyzed and verified all related information including credit bureau report ,customer data to evaluate credit worthiness. Performed credit approval or deny and loan collection as well as customer services.

Stock Broker J.W Capital Co.,Ltd. 2009- 2010
Monitored capital market to support clients’ investment and provided stock trading service. Maintained an relationship with clients and expanded new customers.

Thai Trade Office 2007 - 2008
Provided useful information including related regulation regarding set up new business with service-mind for SMEs. Established relationships with various organizations to build up network and cooperation.

Thank you for your all comments