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Hello everyone,Can you please review this paragraph and correct any grammer mistakes.=A problem that I would like to see solved is how to pay your parking lot. Using SMS to pay your parking lot will save you time rather than waiting on line.Simply link your credit card with your cell phone number on a website. Then send your parking lot number with the period of time to a specific number. It will charge your credit card the amount needed.=Thanks

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

Can you please review this paragraph and correct any grammer mistakes.

A problem that I would like to see solved is how to pay your parking lot. Using SMS to pay your parking lot will save you time rather than waiting on line.
Simply link your credit card with your cell phone number on a website. Then send your parking lot number with the period of time to a specific number. It will charge your credit card the amount needed.

I don't know if your system makes sense. I have just tried to improve the English.

You need to describe the problem more explicitly, as follows.

A problem that I would like to see solved is how to avoid a delay when paying in a parking lot. Using SMS will save you time and allow you to avoid waiting in line.
Simply link your credit card with your cell phone number on a website. Then send your parking space number along with the period of time to a specific phone number. This will charge the amount to your credit card.

Clive

Griffin · Answer

Thank you very much. I really appreciate it.

Alc24 · Answer

Hello Clive,
Can I ask you a litte thing, it has to do with this sentence This will charge the amount to your credit card.

Could you tell me please which are natural?

I charged the bill to her account.

I charged the bill to her credit card.

I charged the bill on your credit card.

I charged 100 dollars on your credit card.

I charged you 100 dollars to your credit card.

The hotel hasn't charged your card.
The hotel hasn't charged to your card.

The hotel charged your card 100 dollars, madame.

The hotel reimbursed the guest $100 dollars on his credit card.

Thank you so much

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A problem that I would like to see solved is how to pay your parking lot. Using SMS to pay your parking lot will save you time rather than waiting on line.
Simply link your credit card with your cell phone number on a website. Then send your parking lot number with the period of time to a specific

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