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The bar charts compare the proportions of Australians and non-Australians residing in cities, rural areas, and towns in two discrete years, including 1995 and 2010.

Overall, the percentages of Australian and non-Australian city dwellers rose and always took the largest share of the charts in the two examined years. By contrast, the number of Australian-born and non-Australia-born people living in town and rural residents all declined.

In 1995, the percentage of people who were born outside Australia and lived in metropolises was 60%, outnumbering that of Australians by 10 percent. Additionally, one-fifth of Australians lived in town, roughly doubling their non-Australian counterparts. Whereas, one-third of Australians were rural inhabitants, compared to two-fifths of non-Australians.

After 15 years, except for the percentages for metropolitans, the others had an opposite trajectory. Regarding Australians dwelling in cities, their percentage increased to roughly 65%, 15% lower than non-Australians. In terms of people living in towns and the countryside, the percentages for Australians dropped to an equivalent level, at nearly 18%, while those of non-Australians were only 10% and 5% respectively.