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Snuppelina Posted 13 years ago
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Please help paraphrazing a clumsy sentence
Please help paraphrazing this sentence - I don't really get where is a subject, object, etc.:
It was suggested to design 2-channels charge-sensitive preamplifier in a separate box and to serve all channels from focal detectors and silicon detectors of the future detection system one should apply needed quantity of such boxes.
It was suggested to design 2-channels charge-sensitive preamplifier in a separate box and to serve all channels from focal detectors and silicon detectors of the future detection system one should apply needed quantity of such boxes.
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It was suggested to design 2-channels charge-sensitive preamplifier in a separate box and to serve all channels from focal detectors and silicon detectors of the future detection system one should apply needed quantity of such boxes It''s a very poor rand run-on sentence. I don't understand parts of it. I'll do my best.
- It was suggested to design 2-channels charge-sensitive preamplifier in a separate box and to serve all channels from focal detectors and silicon detectors of the future detection system one should apply needed quantity of such boxes It''s a very poor rand run-on sentence.
- I don't understand parts of it.
- I'll do my best.
- Designing the 2-channels charge-sensitive preamplifier in a separate box was suggested.
- Another suggestion was to serve all channels from the focal detectors and silicon detectors of the future detection system.
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It was suggested to design 2-channels charge-sensitive preamplifier in a separate box and to serve all channels from focal detectors and silicon detectors of the future detection system one should apply needed quantity of such boxes
It''s a very poor rand run-on sentence. I don't understand parts of it.
I'll do my best.
It''s a very poor rand run-on sentence. I don't understand parts of it.
I'll do my best.
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Thanks, Clive. I think I got the meaning of this sentence:it was suggested to design this preamplifier in a separate box. And in order to serve all channels from focal detectors of the future detection system, one should have an appropriate number of such boxes.
How would you paraphraze it in this case?
Could you please paraphraze this sentence too? It's terrible.
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I think I got the meaning of this sentence:it was suggested to design this preamplifier in a separate box. And in order to serve all channels from focal detectors of the future detection system, one should have an appropriate number of such boxes.
How would you paraphrase it in this case?
It was suggested that we should design this preamplifier in a
How would you paraphrase it in this case?
It was suggested that we should design this preamplifier in a
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Hi there!
What would be better to say:
The results are discussed from the point of view of the effect of the nuclei structure on the propability of interaction at high energies.
or
The results are discussed with the relation to the effect of the nuclei structure on the propability of interaction at high energies.
Thanks!
What would be better to say:
The results are discussed from the point of view of the effect of the nuclei structure on the propability of interaction at high energies.
or
The results are discussed with the relation to the effect of the nuclei structure on the propability of interaction at high energies.
Thanks!
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