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Zelda Ashmore Posted 13 years ago
Business & Finance

Please help on this cover letter - check my grammar?

Dear ___________,
I am writing in answer to your advertisement which appeared on ____________________ to apply for the
Fashion Designer position at your company.

I am a highly creative designer with over 8 years of experience.
I have worked for leading italian apparel brands such United Colors of Benetton, Sisley, Armani Jr, Blumarine,
Tru Trussardi, Diesel, Coin, OVS industry, Chicco, Prenatal.
I have a very keen interest in garment and print wear design as well as having advanced textile techniques,
illustration and hand painting skills from years of artistic studies.
I have strong Adobe illustrator and Adobe Photoshop skills with a love for shape and colour within my
design work and I am able to create work to a specified design brief with relevant research material, excellent
time management and organisation skills, fabric sourcing, design developments, and print, working towards
set deadlines where necessary.
I am enthusiastic, self-motivated and able to work with a team of creative designers.

Although I am enjoying my present job in Italy, I am looking out for opportunities abroad as I would like to
branch out to new experiences which allow me to express to the best my creative skills and to consolidate
my background. I'm ready for a new challenge!
I am available to start working within two weeks notice. I want to point out my availability to move to UK.

In that regard, I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you, I am exploring new opportunities and
would welcome a personal interview for the position.
If you wish to arrange for an interview please contact me via email.
I appreciate your time and consideration, and look forward to hearing from you!

Sincerely,
  

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Welcome to the Forums, Zelda! Only two suggestions: be sure the format (paragraphing is correct - it may just be how it turned out here that makes it look odd); I think it's still proper to mention, at least, that you have personal and professional references upon request. Good luck.

  • Welcome to the Forums, Zelda!
  • Only two suggestions: be sure the format (paragraphing is correct - it may just be how it turned out here that makes it look odd); I think it's still proper to mention, at least, that you have personal and professional references upon request.
  • Good luck.
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Emotion: shake handsWelcome to the Forums, Zelda!
Only two suggestions: be sure the format (paragraphing is correct - it may just
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thanks so much Philip!

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