Please help on this cover letter - check my grammar?
Dear ___________, I am writing in answer to your advertisement which appeared on ____________________ to apply for the Fashion Designer position at your company.
I am a highly creative designer with over 8 years of experience. I have worked for leading italian apparel brands such United Colors of Benetton, Sisley, Armani Jr, Blumarine, Tru Trussardi, Diesel, Coin, OVS industry, Chicco, Prenatal. I have a very keen interest in garment and print wear design as well as having advanced textile techniques, illustration and hand painting skills from years of artistic studies. I have strong Adobe illustrator and Adobe Photoshop skills with a love for shape and colour within my design work and I am able to create work to a specified design brief with relevant research material, excellent time management and organisation skills, fabric sourcing, design developments, and print, working towards set deadlines where necessary. I am enthusiastic, self-motivated and able to work with a team of creative designers.
Although I am enjoying my present job in Italy, I am looking out for opportunities abroad as I would like to branch out to new experiences which allow me to express to the best my creative skills and to consolidate my background. I'm ready for a new challenge! I am available to start working within two weeks notice. I want to point out my availability to move to UK.
In that regard, I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you, I am exploring new opportunities and would welcome a personal interview for the position. If you wish to arrange for an interview please contact me via email. I appreciate your time and consideration, and look forward to hearing from you!
Sincerely,
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Welcome to the Forums, Zelda! Only two suggestions: be sure the format (paragraphing is correct - it may just be how it turned out here that makes it look odd); I think it's still proper to mention, at least, that you have personal and professional references upon request. Good luck.
— Philip
Welcome to the Forums, Zelda!
Only two suggestions: be sure the format (paragraphing is correct - it may just be how it turned out here that makes it look odd); I think it's still proper to mention, at least, that you have personal and professional references upon request.
Good luck.
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